I wouldn't change anything in my book because it is nonfiction. There are things that I would like to have happened to benefit Louie, but it would have changed everything that has happened. I don't believe that you can change anything in a story that actually happened. You can't change the setting because it was in a war and if it changed they would be somewhere where the war wasn't. You can't change the characters because it would have changed the plot. I don't think the story needs to be changed. It is already interesting to me and it is fine the way it is.