Fear No Evil
p. 1- 25
The beginning starts out by describing an officer and how he is new to his job, but he needs to focus because there is a hurricane occuring and victims are calling into the station. They need as many officers that are willing to help protect their citizens. I would not have began the story this way because I think it takes away from describing the characters, and it does not provide a good character sketch of the main character. Also, the chaos caused from the main event right now, which is a hurricane, is entertaining, but I do not see how the author will be able to keep his audience entertained. I am hoping he proves me wrong because overall I really like this book so far!