Youth in Revolt
Beginning of book
If I could change one aspect of the book, I would change how the main character, Nick goes back and forth with himself. I find it very confusing and hard to follow. I guess it is the whole point of the book, but I find it frustrating. The book is based on a kid who has a good side, and a bad side. Just like everyone else. He focuses on them both instead of just one or the other. I would change it so it was more noticable which side he was talking about. I dont really know how it would change the other elements in the book, because I just began reading it, but I know it would make it a lot easier to understand.