Kami Garcia & Margaret Stohl
The one thing I would like to change about my book is to make it keep going when they have flashbacks. They are packed in between actual time. Every time it gives me a flashback though it doesn't seem to finish the whole idea and doesn't tell everything. Also the characters in the flashbacks aren't the same ones as the characters in actual time. This makes it rather confusing because I don't understand how the current time characters can flash back to times they weren't part of. Of course this is probably just a way to keep the suspense rolling! So if it were to change I probably wouldn't like it. If they told the whole story right away there wouldn't be a point. I am excited to hear the rest of the book unfold in its suspenseful and confusing ways.