Roses are Red
By James Patterson
I would change the main villian in the story to a hyena, because they are a freaky animal that have a weird laugh. The villian is sick minded, and he likes to laugh at Alex Cross because he knows everything that Alex is doing. I would make Alex an eagle, because he fights crime for a living. His job protects the country from bad people like "The Mastermind" (villain) and he has to be very courageous and brave. His job really shows the pride for his country, and the eagle is a big symbol of pride.