By: Laurie Halse Anderson
pg.40
If I could change one thing in this book, I would change how the chapters are laid out. In this book, they don't really have chapters, there is just headings with a couple paragraphs until the next heading. Doing this doesn't give the book much information and makes it really hard to follow. There is so much going on. If you changed this, the rest of the book would make more sense and be easier to follow along with.
I've read this book before and I remember it being like that, too. I would get really confused as to how much time has passed or what was going on. But it gives it a feeling of being a really scatterbrained book and that's kind of how I pictured Melinda's personality.
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