Maximum Ride: The Angel Expirement
Finished
If I could change one aspect of my book it would be that the children don't have anywhere to call home or go to. I feel that if they had a home they would all be much stronger. I'd make the change for them, because they all deserve parents to go to and a place to call home. This change would provide the main characters with more strength than they have, because their self confidence is low from all the bad things that have happened to them. These bad things consist of; being taken from their parents at birth, held captive in a laboratory called "the school", and being chased by wolf-men called erasers. Having a place to call home would also give them more comfortability around normal humans, since the kids have wings and all.
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