Mike Lupica
End
I like the ending of my book because they of course win in the end like any good sporting book. Nick Crandall, the main character, becomes the hero at the end of the book and no one expected him to be the hero which makes it a great story. It ends like any normal sporting book so I guess it is good. I would change maybe how they win. It could have been made to where it would be a weird way to win, but it is concluded like any normal sporting book ends. So other than that I think it is a good ending.
You remind me of Nick Crandall. You are the hero of anything you do. How did they win the game? Was it dramatic? Did it flow well?
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