Miracle on 49th Street
Mike Lupica
pg. 175
If i would change anything in my book it would be sam, molly's best friend. I think that it would be way more realistic if her best friend would be a girl. I think that sam would be a better friend if he was a girl. Then i think we would get more insight on molly's thoughts. With him being a guy this restricts what we know about molly because she does not tell him as much. This would change the mood of the book.
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